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titeblOndineTt Anglais [ Première ] 2 16/03/09 à 15:23

Coucou à tous , donc je voux explique mon petit soucis du jour , je dois faire un exposé sur une Publicité des Années 50 ( Airline =compagnie d'avion américaine plus précisément ) ,le problème c'est que l'anglais à l'écrit sa fait 2. C'est pour ca que jaurai besoin de votre aide .. Donc voici mon Brouillon en Anglais ( dite moi si c'est compréhensible et si je devrais changer certaine choses ..)

Do you fed up to travel 3 days to see your grand-mother ?
, You children have never seen the Australia ?
You need to make a Break ,and a short Escape ?
To profit your Holidays in family without lost your time ?
WE HAVE THE SOLUTION ! AIRLINE IS YOUR SOLUTION !
The Compagny take you where you had ever dream to go ,Your children could describ the World and you allow to be relax !Australia , Italy ,Deutchland , Danemark , Spain where you want to go , wa accompagny you during a short travel
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[..] Ne vous moquez pas de mon Anglais =/
Merci pour votre aide Smile

Anglais [ Première ] 1/2 16/03/2009 à 15:31
Are you fed up with traveling 3 days to see your grand-mother ?
, Your children have never seen Australia ?
You need to have a Break ,and a short Escape ?
To enjoy your Holidays in family without losing your time ?
WE HAVE THE SOLUTION ! AIRLINE IS YOUR SOLUTION !
The Company takes you where you have ever dreamt to go ,Your children could describ the World and you allow to be relax (pas compris cette phrase)!Australia , Italy ,Germany , Danemark , Spain where you want to go , wa accompany you during a short travel (pas compris non plus).
Choose Airline Company to live a Real Dream
Anglais [ Première ] 2/2 16/03/2009 à 18:01
Are you fed up with traveling 3 days to see your grand-mother ?
Your children have never seen Australia ?
You need to have a Break, and a short Escape ?
To enjoy your Holidays in family without waste (wasting ?) your time ?
WE HAVE THE SOLUTION ! AIRLINE IS YOUR SOLUTION !
The Company takes you where you have ever dreamt to go ,Your children could describ the World and you're allowed to be relax in Australia , Italy ,Germany , Danemark , Spain... where you want. We'll take care of you during a short travel.
Choose Airline Company to live a Real Dream
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