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LoSt PrOpHeTs   Essai d'anglais 10 28/04/06 à 22:02

Bonjour,

J'ai un petit essai à faire en anglais et j'aurais besoin d'un petit peu d'aide Exclamation

Voici le sujet :

"Do you think that the family unit is an old-fashioned concept which will disappear in the future ? (200 words)"

voilà sympatoch le sujet non Question

Essai d'anglais 1/10 28/04/2006 à 22:35
I HAVE IDEAS BUT I CANNOT EXPLAIN ALL IN ENGLISH
Essai d'anglais 2/10 28/04/2006 à 22:47
No, because that a scientific truth ; that humans can't live alone because they became mad.When somebody was young, he must have mother and father to have an example. Family was one of the first concept who is in humans spirit. That why, children who have unknows parents would research them to have an identity.Famil is an too older concept for be forgotten.

pour la suite j'ai la flemme.ya quelques faute masi c déja sa Innocent

Faire la biz
Essai d'anglais 3/10 28/04/2006 à 22:48
Pretty easy. In the mordern society, the family loose of its essence, although its the first model of community and society. Why ? Because of the individualist aspect of this consumer society. In fact, you are pushed to individualism, to hedonism. Before, everybody thought that family was the thing to preserve, whatever could happen, because it was what you were working, living. Now we live for ourselves. We are self fish. The hapiness of an united family is the most of time, old fashined. But, not eveywhere. In some countries, something traditionnal persist and make the family united, in spite of society. It depends of the education....
Ect etc.

y'a surement des fautes ^^
Essai d'anglais 4/10 28/04/2006 à 22:57
yes of course!!!
Essai d'anglais 5/10 29/04/2006 à 02:57
This question is too stupid... Then, I rather will write a poem to you very pretty:
Why do stars fall down from the sky
Every time you walk by?
Just like me, they long to be
Close to you.
Essai d'anglais 6/10 29/04/2006 à 04:07
ben moi jai rien compris de squi est marquer Crying or Very sad chu trop nulle Sad
Essai d'anglais 7/10 29/04/2006 à 16:58
I think this concept is surely false because the family is something which is very important for the human in order to be listened, helped if it's necessary. Then the family can give to anyone of its memebers some love, protection and confidence. We can tell some secrets to one member of the family and it will be keep securely. The future can't change anyone of this feeling because our heart, our interior and our life are programmed in oder to be unit with all the memeber of the family. However there are some exeption which are due of the divorce for example or of the death of someone in that family but in all of that case the proch familly will be more united. One case is very different it's when you are angry with someone of your family this and only for me can desunit a family and not the future

vooila il douit quand même y avoir qq fautes mais j'esp^ère que ca t'aidera un petit peu
a+et merci de me permettre de parler un peu anglais!!!
Essai d'anglais 8/10 29/04/2006 à 17:19
Stop trying to speak English ,No one can be as articulate as me (hey that ryhmes!!) Rire

Family has always been an important factor in human life since it prepares a person for their own life.A mother and Father are essential to show an example of living to their child and without them ,it would be very hard for an individual to live a normal,healthy life:The lack of rules and boundaries would ultimately lead to an individual with no basic understanding of social life.I don't believe that the family unit will dissapear in the future because it has been around forever and is simply the most fundemental thing a new born Human being needs to have any sort of success in his own life.
I also don't see what could possibly replace a family in the future,could there one day be robots who raise children without the need of real parents?Maybe,but even still,something like that could never realy replace the family unit ,which has been around since the dawn of time.
Voila j'espere que ca t'aide ,tinkiete pas ya aucune faute
Essai d'anglais 9/10 29/04/2006 à 18:29
Think you very much for your answers !! It's very friendly Laughing
There are very good ideas !

Pour ceux qui veulent participer mais pas en anglais ils peuvent aussi !!

Merci à tous c'est cool de m'aider. Bravo
Essai d'anglais 10/10 21/05/2006 à 16:35
Bonjour,
Je vous remercie pour votre aide, grâce à vous j'ai pû mettre de trés bonnes idées dans mon essai Exclamation
Je vous tiendrais au courant de la note si ça vous intéresse.
MERCI ENCORE
Very Happy
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