My Hero
My hero is a man who is seventy-seven years old, who had a transplantation of the heart eighteen years ago and who’s got a good sense of humor. He is my grandfather on my mother’s side.
He lost his father when he was eight years old, he had to work to help his family and to pay his studies.
My grandfather met my grandmother at eighteen. She came of a rich family and she pushed him to continue studying to improve his position.
He got married when he became twenty-eight years old, being already the auxiliary of the bank, he began to construct buildings and he persisted studying.
At the age of forty he managed to be the director of the bank, building more and more and having four or five children.
When he was forty-six years old, he was on his third year of jurisprudence and he almost did his English exam with the charges of five children.
His career was interrupted by a series of infarcts that let him incompetent to continue working.
He is a hero to me because he was able to establish a splendid career and a great fortune without help. He could also pay academic studies for his five children with a high level of life uppermost.
Voilà euuh j'ai corrigé les quelques fautes que j'ai vues. Le seul truc c'est que parfois je voyais pas trop ce que tu avais voulu dire donc j'ai changé en fonction de ce que j'ai cru que tu voulais dire mais c'est peut-être faux donc relis quand même le texte... et euuh à la fin le "uppermost" je vois pas trop ce qu'il fait là...
Voilà j'espère que ca t'aidera